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Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Miss Smith show don't tell-Set Scene

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  1. Ooooo! Another great example of show not tell! Reading this almost gave me goosebumps! I really feel like I could be lost in this haunted forrest too!

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  2. Ooooo! Another great example of show not tell! Reading this almost gave me goosebumps! I really feel like I could be lost in this haunted forrest too! I can't wait to see what happens next.

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  3. Kia ora Liona. I agree with Miss Newton - oh my gosh what has happened him? You will have to write another instalment because I can't stand the suspense. Ka pai to mahi.
    from Mrs Morgan-French

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    1. Thank you Mrs Morgan-French I really appreciate the advice and I will write another instalment.

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